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It was a lazy summer afternoon in the town of my town. I was surfing dA looking for a FAQ on how to jazz up my profile page when I saw a new button on the FAQ's page labeled 'manual search'   Me: Manuel search huh? Well, might not hurt to try it. So I clicked on the button and the computer screen turned blank. Me: Hey! What happened!?!  Then, it started glowing grey. I looked closer to the screen to investigate, when a mysterious force pulled me into the computer. I fell for about 20 seconds though the strange vortex before landing on a cold tile ground. I got up and saw rows of files by the hundreds. There were no people, but a bunch of fella help bots everywhere. I walked over to one that was carrying some files to ask about all of this. Me: excuse me, but where am I?  FellaBot: Your in FAQ land kid, dA's new beta search method. Don't worry, you'll get out once you find the FAQ you  came here for.    Me: OK, then can you tell me where to find a FAQ on profile customization?  FellaBot: Yes, thats number #90. You can find it in cabinet 3. Me: Thanks.    As I walked, I saw more FellaBots herding up...... Albino Llamas? I could see automatically that they were Llama's and not lamas. That's a skill that any dArtist should be able to do. One of them tried licking me before the FellaBot pulled him back. Finally I found the file I was looking for. I read it over and 100 creative idea's flooded my mind. In the lower corner of the paper there was a button labeled 'return'. I tried pressing it, and in an instant I found myself back in my house. I looked at the screen, still on the FAQ page, and saw the Manuel search button sitting there. Me: I wonder what I could find on a second go. And I moved my mouse to the button and clicked.....
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commendment 6: Thou shall faq!!!


I like this one the best, I see FAQ land as a warehouse of FAQ's found on the webz managed by $spyed's personal army of fella bots and llama's.
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This is a really cute story, I like creativity used and the effortless way you included so many aspects of DA. One suggestion to improve this story would be to be more detailed. Rather than say "I did this, then that, As I did this, that happened" describe what's happening, paint a picture with words. One example would be, instead of saying you saw fellabots, describe what you see, then make the connection they are fellabots. even though we all know what they look like, it makes the story more enjoyable when it has more detail.
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~richalvrezfano12 Sep 11, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks! I hope I win when the contest ends
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~richalvrezfano12 Aug 3, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks. 4 comendments left!
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